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Models: Jad, Gabriel and Emma. Unconscious of the fact that they were models, I might add.
Taken in Lyon sur Mer, May 2009 On our revision trip. Colours edited & border added in PhotoScape Comments
 great title. nice work catching your friends kissing. that's a neat and candid couple shot.
Thanks, I'm kind of annoyed about the short crop to the right but otherwise really like it
 -- Frenglish and proud  yeah the framing is maybe a little distracting. Last year my goal was to try to get the image exposed properly and not have, over exposed or under-exposed shots. I've gotten better at that, but now my goal is to get better framings, and to be more aware of keeping things level. I've been reading a lot of the critiques on dA since they've added that feature. The photography book I read didn't have anything about the Rule of Thirds, which is apparently very important. I think everyone agrees though that even that rule has to be broken sometimes.
while it would be interesting to see the framing of this shot shifted over to the right, I also like how it is. It's nice to have some extra frame on the left. It seems to tell more of a story about him and where he might be throwing the ball. The short frame on the right kinda works as well. They are kind of on the sidelines in a completely different frame of mind than the boy with the ball. Perhaps it's perfect. To be honest, I know the rule of thirds and very rarely use it... mostly for very simple shots (one person, one flower, etc). I just tend to go with what looks right on a particular photo.
Thankyou for the comment- I think it's fair  It's always a struggle to strike that balance between what the photo is, what you want the photo to be and what the photo could be.-- Frenglish and proud  Great streetography! Combined with an awesome title - perfect. Nothing different to add -- Greetings from Germany  [link]  -- Frenglish and proud |
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